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True Adamance
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Posted - 2015.06.02 00:53:00 -
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I like your plots but you need a bit of variation in them.
They all seem like they are about Lucent Echelon acquiring something. Plot wise I'd like to see Lucent doing some of the Federations wet work. That the Federal Marines can plausibly deny having organised but people know Lucent is doing behind the scenes of the CEWMPA warzone.
Since I don't have recording footage the plots I am working on lack the same impact. But hell Insorum ain't gonna find itself.
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True Adamance
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Posted - 2015.06.02 03:05:00 -
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Sgt Kirk wrote:True Adamance wrote:I like your plots but you need a bit of variation in them.
They all seem like they are about Lucent Echelon acquiring something. Plot wise I'd like to see Lucent doing some of the Federations wet work. That the Federal Marines can plausibly deny having organised but people know Lucent is doing behind the scenes of the CEWMPA warzone.
Since I don't have recording footage the plots I am working on lack the same impact. But hell Insorum ain't gonna find itself.
E.G- If you run into one match against particularly derpy enemies write a description from a Scope perspective interviewing Caldari survivors who claim to have been affected by a particularly nasty and illegal chemical compound usually found in PSYCLID rounds.
((PSYCLID rounds are chemical weapons in bullet form))
Are the Gallente testing PSYCLID rounds on State Operatives? Lucent Echelon vehemently denies having been contracted to so and refused to comment on the rather notable increase in its corporate shares after a new PSYCLID compound hits the black markets.
Sgt Kirk made the comment that "Every Green Bleeding citizen of the Federation knows that the use of chemical weapons if a violation of your basic human rights to have healthy lungs. IF YOU DISAGREE YOU MUST BE SOME KIND OF CALDARI LOVING DISSIDENT!" Well, we did do some black eagle testing in one of my videos, and as far as variety goes. I'll see about that, war is about acquiring as much as you can to win after all. Field testing and test are something I could definitely work in, especially in those matches that are outside the typical storyline. Speaking of that, I'm still trying to finish up about two storylines, I just haven't run into the same people and or the same region.
Well I can agree with that but as much as it is about gaining what you can it is also about denying your enemy any advantage whatsoever. Lucent Echelon is supposed to the the guys the Federal Marines call when their normal guys cannot get things done right. What about when they they have work their normal guys don't have the stomach for?
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True Adamance
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Posted - 2015.06.02 03:57:00 -
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Sgt Kirk wrote:True Adamance wrote:Sgt Kirk wrote:True Adamance wrote:I like your plots but you need a bit of variation in them.
They all seem like they are about Lucent Echelon acquiring something. Plot wise I'd like to see Lucent doing some of the Federations wet work. That the Federal Marines can plausibly deny having organised but people know Lucent is doing behind the scenes of the CEWMPA warzone.
Since I don't have recording footage the plots I am working on lack the same impact. But hell Insorum ain't gonna find itself.
E.G- If you run into one match against particularly derpy enemies write a description from a Scope perspective interviewing Caldari survivors who claim to have been affected by a particularly nasty and illegal chemical compound usually found in PSYCLID rounds.
((PSYCLID rounds are chemical weapons in bullet form))
Are the Gallente testing PSYCLID rounds on State Operatives? Lucent Echelon vehemently denies having been contracted to so and refused to comment on the rather notable increase in its corporate shares after a new PSYCLID compound hits the black markets.
Sgt Kirk made the comment that "Every Green Bleeding citizen of the Federation knows that the use of chemical weapons if a violation of your basic human rights to have healthy lungs. IF YOU DISAGREE YOU MUST BE SOME KIND OF CALDARI LOVING DISSIDENT!" Well, we did do some black eagle testing in one of my videos, and as far as variety goes. I'll see about that, war is about acquiring as much as you can to win after all. Field testing and test are something I could definitely work in, especially in those matches that are outside the typical storyline. Speaking of that, I'm still trying to finish up about two storylines, I just haven't run into the same people and or the same region. Well I can agree with that but as much as it is about gaining what you can it is also about denying your enemy any advantage whatsoever. Lucent Echelon is supposed to the the guys the Federal Marines call when their normal guys cannot get things done right. What about when they they have work their normal guys don't have the stomach for? Lucent doesn't do crimes against humanity if that's where you're going.
Dude everyone in New Eden deals with crimes against humanity. I'm not suggesting that though, only operations of the like that Black Eagles undertake that Federal Groups don't want people knowing about.
That being said if you genuinely believe the Gallente don't have dark little secrets then I suggest you please go and read your lore.
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True Adamance
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Posted - 2015.06.02 04:11:00 -
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Sgt Kirk wrote:True Adamance wrote:
Dude everyone in New Eden deals with crimes against humanity. I'm not suggesting that though, only operations of the like that Black Eagles undertake that Federal Groups don't want people knowing about.
That being said if you genuinely believe the Gallente don't have dark little secrets then I suggest you please go and read your lore.
Never said that they didn't, no need to act like an ass.
Apologies..... without being an EVE pilot in your channel there is no way I could have known that nor is that information really all that available.....that being said I think I understand more what the Lucent Echelon is now.
More or less what PIE is for the Amarr.
Empress > Individual Political Alignments
Still a Kelly's Heroes-esque plot would be rather entertaining I think.
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True Adamance
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Posted - 2015.06.02 21:33:00 -
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Oh I do love my hate mail. In every game, in every form, it feels like Justice!
"Crush all who complain!"
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True Adamance
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Posted - 2015.06.02 23:15:00 -
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Aero Yassavi wrote:True Adamance wrote:Oh I do love my hate mail. In every game, in every form, it feels like Justice!
Democracy!
DEMOCRACY!
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